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		<title>I Didn&#8217;t Win, But I Feel Like A Winner</title>
		<link>http://www.phillyscreenwriter.com/2008/09/18/i-didnt-win-but-i-feel-like-a-winner/</link>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 18 Sep 2008 15:49:33 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Cecil</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[John August held a scene writing contest on this blog and I thought it was the perfect thing to get me back into writing so I entered. I didn&#8217;t win but, that wasn&#8217;t the out come I was hoping for. I wanted to just complete something that had a deadline.
For the contest you had to [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p></p><p><a href="http://johnaugust.com/">John August</a> held a scene writing contest on this blog and I thought it was the perfect thing to get me back into writing so I entered. I didn&#8217;t win but, that wasn&#8217;t the out come I was hoping for. I wanted to just complete something that had a deadline.</p>
<p>For the contest you had to write a scene using three things: A Fork, A Photo and a Phobia. Easy right? Well I didn&#8217;t want to use the clichéd phobias, so I picked two, one being common and the other no so common. This by no means was a polished effort. I just wanted to get it done so I could enter. Now, on to bigger contests. Maybe I can finish a whole screenplay now. Anyway, here is the scene I entered. You can head over to <a href="http://johnaugust.com/archives/2008/a-fork-a-phobia-a-friggin-lot-of-entries">John&#8217;s blog to see the other entries</a> (110 in all).</p>
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<p class="transition">FADE IN:</p>
<p class="sceneheader">INT. PSYCHIATRIC HOSPITAL &#8211; RECREATION ROOM &#8211; DAY</p>
<p class="action">BREE CAIN, early 30’s, sits at a checkers table playing against an empty seat. Her hair is in bad need of a “What Not To Wear” makeover. Her hospital gown drapes off one shoulder exposing her collarbone and has a permanently stained and faded. Her nails are bitten down a little too far but despite all this, she’s still attractive.</p>
<p class="action">In the background an elderly man runs past her with both hands on a walker, with only the wheels touching the ground, clearly not needing it.</p>
<p class="action">Orderlies and gaurds attend the patients, trying to get them to stop or start doing someting they have no interest in.</p>
<p>A HAND reaches from behind Bree and moves one of her checker pieces, jumping three black checkers -
<p class="character">MAN’S VOICE (O.S.)</p>
<p class="dialogue">King me.</p>
<p class="action">The Man, DET. GERRITSEN, early 40’s, sits in the empty seat.</p>
<p>Bree looks up at him, then back at the board. She kings him.
<p class="character">DET. GERRITSEN</p>
<p>It’s nice to see you’ve assimilated yourself to the craziness of this.
<p class="character">BREE</p>
<p>It’s contagious, I think you should leave before you catch it.
<p class="character">DET. GERRITSEN</p>
<p class="dialogue">You don’t have to be here, you know.</p>
<p>He reaches into his pocket and pulls out a photograph placing it on the checker board, disrupting the game.
<p class="character">DET. GERRITSEN (CONT’D)</p>
<p class="dialogue">Now, let’s stop with the fake psycho racket. You’re only here for protection, you don’t have to act as if. Tell me everything you know about this photograph so I can move on with my case and you can return to your normal life.</p>
<p class="action">Bree picks up the photograph, stares.</p>
<p>Det. Gerritsen reached across the table and grabs the photograph out of her hand, slamming it back down on the table. Checkers fly everywhere.
<p class="character">DET. GERRITSEN (CONT’D)</p>
<p class="dialogue">You’ve seen it enough times, you know what it is, now tell me!</p>
<p class="action">Heads turn looking at the commotion, two guards step closer heading towards their direction but stop before reaching.</p>
<p>All the patients in the room erupt in laughter/yells. The orderlies and guards try to calm the room.
<p class="character">BREE</p>
<p>You know what I miss the most?
<p class="character">DET. GERRITSEN</p>
<p>I don’t give a shit. Tell me what the photo means.
<p class="character">BREE</p>
<p>The normal things. Like eating with a sterling silver fork and not the plastic shit they give you here. a shape knife, my own clothes&#46;&#46;&#46;
<p class="character">DET. GERRITSEN</p>
<p>You can have all that, just cooperate. You being in this nut factory does nothing for either of us. I hate coming here as much as you hate being here.
<p class="character">BREE</p>
<p>I don’t mind it, it’s better than the alternative.
<p class="character">DET. GERRITSEN</p>
<p>How could you not? I think we’ve done a great job of protecting you up until this point. Why don’t you trust me?
<p class="character">BREE</p>
<p class="dialogue">It’s not that I don’t trust you. I have a huge case of Ballistophobia which doesn&#8217;t help my Necrophobia.</p>
<p>Det. Gerritsen blanks. Clueless.
<p class="character">BREE (CONT’D)</p>
<p>My fear of bullets and death. Look officer&#46;&#46;&#46;
<p class="character">DET. GERRITSEN</p>
<p>Detective.
<p class="character">BREE</p>
<p>&#46;&#46;&#46;I’m not going to tell you while I know the man who gave you that is alive. I’d rather stay here.
<p class="character">DET. GERRITSEN</p>
<p class="dialogue">Fine.</p>
<p>Det. Gerritsen stands up
<p class="character">DET. GERRITSEN (CONT’D)</p>
<p class="dialogue">Guards!</p>
<p>Three guards run over, grab Bree from her chair and slam her on the ground.
<p class="character">DET. GERRITSEN (CONT’D)</p>
<p class="dialogue">You want to stay here? Then you will get treated like the kooks.</p>
<p>One of the guards pulls a needle out, while the other two try to hold Bree still. She struggle as much as she can, but it’s hopeless.
<p class="character">BREE</p>
<p class="dialogue">What the hell are you doing? What is that?</p>
<p class="action">The guard sticks the needle in her hard as she violently tries to stop them.</p>
<p>Her movement starts to slow. She losing what little power she has until she’s still and we
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		<title>Paralysis by analysis</title>
		<link>http://www.phillyscreenwriter.com/2007/05/19/paralysis-by-analysis/</link>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 19 May 2007 13:09:06 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Cecil</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Now that I&#8217;m getting back into Screenwriting (and blogging), I wanted to write about one of the problems that&#8217;s plaguing me with my writing. Paralysis by analysis  or analysis paralysis . This is a big problem for me. I think to much about what I&#8217;m about to write and then over analyze it the [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p></p><p><img src="http://www.phillyscreenwriter.com/wp-content/uploads/2007/05/scaredguy.jpg" title="Scary dude" alt="Scary dude" align="left" height="300" hspace="10" vspace="10" width="300" />Now that I&#8217;m getting back into Screenwriting (and blogging), I wanted to write about one of the problems that&#8217;s plaguing me with my writing. <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Analysis_paralysis" title="Paralysis by analysis" target="blank_">Paralysis by analysis</a>  or <a href="http://www.chrisg.com/defeating-procrastination-analysis-paralysis/" title="analysis paralysis">analysis paralysis</a> . This is a big problem for me. I think to much about what I&#8217;m about to write and then over analyze it the point of frustration. If I don&#8217;t give up at that point &#8211; most times I do &#8211; I start to &#8220;research&#8221; which turns into surfing the Internet then into watching TV. Afterwards I&#8217;m always upset that I walked away.</p>
<p>Another example would be reading Screenwriting books or information on screenwriting. While this isn&#8217;t bad, I tend to hope and think that inside those pages there will be that one gem that will get me out of the funk and help fix whatever problem I&#8217;m having with plot or whatever it is. In reality, it just a form of procrastination. I&#8217;m always looking for answers to something that hasn&#8217;t been written yet, when I&#8217;m sure if I start writing the answers will come. Sometimes you have to just jump of that cliff and build your wings on the way down.</p>
<p>I learned this by starting another <a href="http://damnilikethat.com/">blog</a>. The idea was simple. The execution shouldn&#8217;t have taken as along as it did, but I got caught up in the idea. This is where most of my projects stall. What was different about starting that blog was I decided to just do it. If it failed so what. How many blogs start and stop on a daily basis? The risk of failing was minimal. I had everything I needed. The only thing holding me back was actually writing the blog.</p>
<p>When I first started taking a stab at Screenwriting, it was all about the writing. The first thing I wrote was a color coded 25 page <strong><em>scene</em></strong> in Microsoft works. I knew nothing about Screenwriting and better yet I feared nothing. There is a quote by Alec Bourne that says; <strong> </strong>&#8220;It is possible to store the mind with a million facts and still be entirely uneducated.&#8221; Relating to this issue, for me it means, just write. Put down the book. Forget proper format (until you&#8217;re done <img src='http://www.phillyscreenwriter.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' />  ). All the books, articles and seminars will help you learn more but they don&#8217;t help you do the one thing that should come easy. Writing. How do you handle this?</p>
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